I want to do this using dyptchs where the first would be a portrait of how the organism took control and then the act it made a person commit.
Tell me what you think so far.
Friday, February 11, 2011
Progress!!!
So in our last crit we talked about how my fruits didn't seem vary vicious or scary. So I thought I would take it a step further as if the fruits and/or vegetables were making us do things or "acts" in this case that we would not normally do.
I want to do this using dyptchs where the first would be a portrait of how the organism took control and then the act it made a person commit.
Tell me what you think so far.
I want to do this using dyptchs where the first would be a portrait of how the organism took control and then the act it made a person commit.
Tell me what you think so far.
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The first one is set up pretty well visually. I think you just need to push your point across a little harder. The background could use a little something to get the eye moving around it.
ReplyDeleteThe second one is a little hard to figure out. The dark parts are all really dark. It took me a while to realize the fruit was there at all. I'd try to incorporate more into the dark parts. Possibly some wires like you were telling me about on Friday.
What's the story of the second one? What caused the wreck? I still like the theme. Keep working on it and I think it'll come out well.